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Paul ClarkeSamurai
Posted: November 6, 20152015-11-06T12:22:42+10:00 2015-11-06T12:22:42+10:00In: Adventure

When her adventurous wheelchair-bound cousin embarks on an outback adventure, a fearful photographer must tag along to protect her, but they encounter killer kangaroos with a taste for human flesh.

When her adventurous wheelchair-bound cousin embarks on an outback adventure, a fearful photographer must tag along to protect her, but they encounter killer kangaroos with a taste for human flesh.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2015-11-06T13:58:18+10:00Added an answer on November 6, 2015 at 1:58 pm

      A wheelchair-bound woman’s holiday in the Outback turns into a battle for survival when she encounters a mob of kangaroos who feast on human flesh.? (25 words)

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    2. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2015-11-11T12:15:00+10:00Added an answer on November 11, 2015 at 12:15 pm

      The logline mentions two protagonists yet describes the photographer as the main character, which creates a bit of confusion. I think best to specify one main character in the logline, to that matter the one character that will face the greatest feat. In this case it sounds like the wheel chair bound adventure seeker should be the MC, that’s why I like DPG’s re write, though I disagree with the structure.

      My try:
      After a wheel-chair bound adventure seeker and her family encounter a mob of man eating Kangaroos, she must lead them all in a fight to kill the Alpha male if they are to survive.

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