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Posted: August 21, 20232023-08-21T10:29:55+10:00 2023-08-21T10:29:55+10:00In: Examples

When her country gets overrun by the Huns, a Chinese teenager girl steals the conscription order from her sick father and dresses up as a boy to fight for the army, but if her secret gets revealed she will face the death penalty. (Mulan 1998)

When her country gets overrun by the Huns, a Chinese teenager girl steals the conscription order from her sick father and dresses up as a boy to fight for the army, but if her secret gets revealed she will face the death penalty. (Mulan 1998)
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    1. Hoosierwriter Penpusher
      2025-07-28T11:12:11+10:00Added an answer on July 28, 2025 at 11:12 am

      The logline doesn’t reveal WHY the teenager wants to fight the invaders, but that will determine the strength of her motivation and whether the reader will empathize with her. The situation could lead to an action-packed adventure if we have a heroine that readers can identify with.

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