When her field badge is suspended, a responsibility adverse FBI agent must escort a terminally ill orphan on her ‘dying wish’ road trip to Disneyland.

It seems to me there’s a missing link in your setup.??How did she get involved in the orphan’s life?? Why, of all the possible “‘musts” that could arise out of being suspended at work,??does this “must” become?the one the agent?chooses to?fulfill.

So the agent is suspended at work.? Did?a superior order?the agent ?to learn responsibility by getting involved in charitable work?? Did he order the agent to take this orphan on a road trip?? That doesn’t seem causal or credible to me.

Why must the agent take this trip? I’m guessing — but not certain — that? a subjective link between her suspension, and her odyssey is a?failure to take responsibility.? She was?irresponsible on the job, now she must learn to be responsible by performing this charitable trip to Disneyland.

Okay, but based on my experience in law enforcement, in dealing with FBI agents,?it is my perception that being an FBI agent ?is intrinsically a job where?one has ?to?take responsibility from Day 1.??It seems to me that if?the agent?can’t learn?to take responsibility on the job, what?are the odds, what are the reasons? the agent would learn?responsibility by doing something else? Like taking a road trip?

Once the road trip gets going — that part of the story seems to have a lot of dramatic?potential.?? But??I ?suggest?there are? pot holes in the? plot between the suspension and?the road trip.

fwiw