Penpusher
Posted: 2016-06-19T23:10:57+10:00 In:

When his girl disappears, a young man finds himself interfering in the last heist of an ageing crook who will stop at nothing to capture the girl he desperately needs to finish the job.

When his girl disappears, a young man finds himself interfering in the last heist of an ageing crook who will stop at nothing to capture the girl he desperately needs to finish the job.
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    1. Uberwriter

      His interfering is done how and with what aim?

      Plus how is the main character? This reads like the story is about the robber and the guy is a side issue.

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    2. Singularity

      Has the girl disappeared because the ageing crook kidnapped her? ?Or are both of them looking for the girl?

      And isn’t his objective goal to rescue the girl? ? Isn’t interfering in the heist ?just a means to his objective goal, not the objective goal?

      And what’s at stake? What does he (and the girl) stand to lose if he fails and/or the crook succeeds? ?I mean, after the job is done, wouldn’t she be free to go back to him, resume their relationship?

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