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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: April 30, 20172017-04-30T10:50:37+10:00 2017-04-30T10:50:37+10:00In: Comedy

When his grandmother encourages a stranger to ?upset his canoe?, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and claim the life – and love – he subconsciously craves.

When his grandmother encourages a stranger to ?upset his canoe?, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and claim the life – and love – he subconsciously craves.
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    1. [Deleted User]
      2017-04-30T11:15:05+10:00Added an answer on April 30, 2017 at 11:15 am

      I want to add that this is a gay rom-com.? I’m unsure how, or if, that should be included in the log line.? It does perhaps make the script more interesting, but it seems a bit forced to add it to the log line.? Any suggestions on how I might do that? Or is it unnecessary?

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2017-04-30T12:33:34+10:00Added an answer on April 30, 2017 at 12:33 pm

      I would have never guessed from the logline that it was intended to be a gay rom-com. And since ?that’s the story hook, you need to let the concept come out of the closet. ?Tell it like it is.

      fwiw

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      2017-05-01T09:00:41+10:00Added an answer on May 1, 2017 at 9:00 am

      What about this:

      When his grandmother sets him up with a man they?ve just met, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and reclaim himself ? and the man he loves.

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