Penpusher
Posted: 2017-04-30T10:50:37+10:00 In:

When his grandmother encourages a stranger to ?upset his canoe?, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and claim the life – and love – he subconsciously craves.

When his grandmother encourages a stranger to ?upset his canoe?, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and claim the life – and love – he subconsciously craves.
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    1. What about this:

      When his grandmother sets him up with a man they?ve just met, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and reclaim himself ? and the man he loves.

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    2. Singularity

      I would have never guessed from the logline that it was intended to be a gay rom-com. And since ?that’s the story hook, you need to let the concept come out of the closet. ?Tell it like it is.

      fwiw

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    3. I want to add that this is a gay rom-com.? I’m unsure how, or if, that should be included in the log line.? It does perhaps make the script more interesting, but it seems a bit forced to add it to the log line.? Any suggestions on how I might do that? Or is it unnecessary?

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