Logliner
Posted: 2016-03-08T03:44:22+10:00 In:

When intruders break into her home, the ghost of a paraplegic must save her unsuspecting husband from the intruders? sinister plan that involves planting venomous snakes in the husband?s closet.

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    1. Best Answer
      Logliner

      While the goal?and stakes are clear, ?I have questions about the setup. How is our ghost going to stop the intruders? Is she a poltergeist? More importantly, why the venomous snakes? I assume these intruders are planning on killing the husband. So why aren’t they just trying to kill him outright? Why go through the trouble of the Snakes on a Plane esque tactics?

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      Singularity

      It wold be better if the logline described the intruders as the ones responsible for her death, then much like in Ghost the stakes are frighteningly plausible.

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