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sharkeatingman
Posted: April 11, 20122012-04-11T15:55:39+10:00 2012-04-11T15:55:39+10:00

When left for dead by his former gang, a reformed outlaw seeks to avenge the murder of his family after an Indian mystic "gifts" him eternal life.

“Undead Redemption”- western horror

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    1. sharkeatingman
      2012-04-13T23:48:40+10:00Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 11:48 pm

      Thanks, SQM. I saw that movie, but don’t remember the similarities. I’ll check it out again.

      I think the “public” can judge thumbs up or down on some responses. It’s kind of depressing to write something, perhaps a response to a question, and have someone (you have no idea whom) come in and slam you with a negative. I think that practice is very detrimental to the overall benefit derived from the site. It certainly affected my outlook substantially…

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    2. SQM
      2012-04-13T15:43:05+10:00Added an answer on April 13, 2012 at 3:43 pm

      Like it!

      Reminds me of “The Missing” with Tommy Lee Jones.

      Could we have thumbs up and down buttons for those who just want to make a quick comment?

      And what’s with the plus and minus numbers on the side?

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    3. sharkeatingman
      2012-04-12T16:46:02+10:00Added an answer on April 12, 2012 at 4:46 pm

      This is a feature film concept, but I am aware of the trends for franchise stories. With that in mind, I did leave the ending open to interpretation, but needless to say, having eternal life in a life that you are without your loved ones is not as much a “gift” as a curse.

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    4. morley
      2012-04-11T17:06:30+10:00Added an answer on April 11, 2012 at 5:06 pm

      Maybe if you reversed the order of the logline it might be more clear. So perhaps it would be “An Indian mystic “gifts” a reformed outlaw with eternal life after being left for dead by his former gang.”

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    5. sharkeatingman
      2012-04-11T16:21:56+10:00Added an answer on April 11, 2012 at 4:21 pm

      Yes. During the slaughter of his family, they shot and “killed” him as well.

      Guess I’ll have to work on clearing that part up a bit, while still keeping the word-count low. That’s why loglining is so hard!

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    6. writerobrien
      2012-04-11T16:05:42+10:00Added an answer on April 11, 2012 at 4:05 pm

      This sounds intriguing. I would not like to see a lot of blood and guts with a lack of story, though. I’m also curious if he eventually returns to normal and dies. If he remains immortal, this would make for an interesting series.

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    7. morley
      2012-04-11T16:05:36+10:00Added an answer on April 11, 2012 at 4:05 pm

      Sounds interesting but I’m confused if his former gang also murdered his family. If they did, then I would make that more clear. Or I’m just daft! lol

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