When she visits her future in-laws’ ranch in southern Texas, a headstrong city girl tries to save two illegal immigrant children when she discovers the ranch manager is using illegal immigrants for fertilizer.
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When she visits her future in-laws’ ranch in southern Texas, a headstrong city girl tries to save two illegal immigrant children when she discovers the ranch manager is using illegal immigrants for fertilizer.
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A little cleanup for redundancy and marketability:
“When visiting future in-laws on a south Texas ranch, a headstrong woman must rescue two undocumented noncitizen children when she discovers the rancher is using migrant workers as fertilizer”
This logline is getting better, keep going!
Thanks.
Interesting idea. Curious to know if the in-laws kill migrant workers? If so, you could elevate the log line a little
‘A headstrong young woman attempts to rescue two children from her prospective in-laws’ Texan ranch when she discovers the family is killing undocumented migrant workers for use as fertilizer.’
Hope that helps.