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KnightriderMentor
Posted: November 18, 20162016-11-18T18:04:41+10:00 2016-11-18T18:04:41+10:00In: Action

When she’s implanted with the memory of a murder, a rookie cop must use inconsistencies between the memory and the physical evidence to catch the real killer.

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2016-11-19T10:21:30+10:00Added an answer on November 19, 2016 at 10:21 am

      Knightrider,

      Perchance, are ?you a reincarnation of Philip K. Dick? 🙂 ?You seem to be fascinated by stories that pivot on memory.

      Anyway, I’m hooked on the premise. ?Proof: ?the logline came to mind several times today in spite of the being out in wild, reveling in a glorious fall day. ?However, I think it needs to be tweaked a little. ?Here’s my take:

      After being implanted with false memories of a murder, a rookie detective must reconcile her memory with the physical evidence to catch the real killer.
      (25 words)

      I was inclined to delete the word ‘real’, but then thought that maybe the false memories implicate the wrong person. ?However, if the ?false evidence is designed merely to lead her on a snipe hunt, on a trail ?of “evidence” leading nowhere, then I think you can drop that word.

      Best wishes with the one. ?This is a movie I would like to see.

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    2. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2016-11-19T16:46:30+10:00Added an answer on November 19, 2016 at 4:46 pm

      This feels like a twist on an average police procedural episode – a murder takes place and a cop discovers evidence to solve the case.
      Aside form the memory device scifi element, can you perhaps raise the stakes on a personal level? Or make the killer a greater threat to a specific group of people? Or include a government conspiracy? Make the implications greater than just this one case.

      Just seems that after the memory thing is introduced this becomes very similar to many shows already available on TV.

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