Die Hard
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When terrorists take his wife hostage in a tower at Christmas Eve, a NYPD detective must dispatch of them to set his wife free and reconcile with her.
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I think you stick to the formula quite well, and I can kind of picture the movie in my head. Though I have no idea which one it is.
Well executed logline; starting with the “When”, telling us about the main character and ending with the must. We do get two “goals” in this story at the end, but only one major hinder in the beginning (terrorists). Maybe one word that could describe our hero’s status with his wife that helps us connect with the reconcile part of our hero’s goal. Maybe not necessary, but the only thing I could think of.