Uberwriter
Posted: 2018-04-04T21:38:44+10:00 In:

After noticing the same stranger at yet another suicide, a novice detective sets out to prove his claims before she incites another tragedy

…only to fall in love with her (mid point reversal or the false victory)

Title: Ms Tiptoe

PS. Yeah it sounds like Basic Instinct to me too..
But her weapon is NLP!!

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    1. Samurai

      A novice detective must identify the stranger he notices at numerous suicide scenes and prove she is linked to the deaths before she strikes again.

      Although it may be better to already know who the stranger is? ?The IMDB logline for Basic Instinct is: ?”A violent police detective investigates a brutal murder that might involve a manipulative and seductive novelist.”

      A novice detective investigates a series of suicides that might involve a brazen stranger seen at each crime scene.

      I’m much better at critiquing that actually coming up with loglines! LOL

      P.S. ?I’m not sure that NLP is sexy enough to incite suicide! ?It’s pretty outdated and discredited scientifically – maybe have her a psychiatrist/hypnotist/cult leader/counsellor?

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