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Jake ReevesPenpusher
Posted: June 16, 20232023-06-16T15:20:42+10:00 2023-06-16T15:20:42+10:00In: Thriller

When the identity of a missing girl is reported to be the niece of the head of the CCTV department, she must review the footage to uncover the mystery behind her niece’s disappearance.

An unnerving mystery/thriller that delves into the emotional turmoil of a woman who holds a crucial role as head of the CCTV department for a rundown train station. When she stumbles on the shocking revelation that a reported missing girl is her own niece, she is faced with an immense challenge: to maintain her composure while her personal and professional worlds collide.

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    1. amandis98 Penpusher
      2023-06-16T15:25:01+10:00Added an answer on June 16, 2023 at 3:25 pm

      That she just must review the footage to figure out the mystery don’t feel like a big enough “must”. what are the stakes? what happens if she don’t figure it out. if you can see it on the tapes the movie will be over very fast. just some thoughts.

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