Penpusher
Posted: 2021-09-06T23:57:50+10:00 In:

When the love of his life is kidnapped by pirates because she carries a certain piece of gold, a smith teams up with a renowned pirate to rescue her.

When the love of his life is kidnapped by pirates because she carries a certain piece of gold, a smith teams up with a renowned pirate to rescue her.
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    1. Good start. I feel like “because she carries a certain piece of gold” is not that necessary. Also I would put in some character trait for the smith. For example: “an honorable young smith”.

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