Logliner
Posted: 2018-01-30T02:04:27+10:00 In:

When the wife of jack suspecting her husband cheated on her , she put up for Humanoid robot and zap him if he fall

When the wife of jack suspecting her husband cheated on her , she put up for Humanoid robot and zap him if he fall
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      Logliner

      i think this is a good logline. the wife is the main character, you tell what he has done, then you tell what will happen at the end.

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      Singularity

      There are some basic English grammar issues with this logline that make it hard to evaluate.

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      Singularity

      “When she suspects her husband of infidelity, a vengeful housewife hires a honey robot to seduce him; and if he fails… zap him right where it hurts the most.”

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      Samurai

      I can see a good comedy with the reversal of the role. The bad guy is the bossy wife who wants to get away from paying alimony by tempting the husband. The unexpected twist is that the honey trap robot falls for the kind husband, but by programming (invented fourth law of robotics, a robot can’t reveal secret from its owner) she can’t reveal the dastardly plan.

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