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ChasFisher
Posted: October 2, 20122012-10-02T13:02:55+10:00 2012-10-02T13:02:55+10:00

When the world?s #1 hacker contracts a digital virus created by the omnipresent MegaCorps, he must rise up and bring down the system he has been leeching off for so long.

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    1. ChasFisher
      2012-10-04T11:16:11+10:00Added an answer on October 4, 2012 at 11:16 am

      I agree with Kriss and should say a “fatal digital virus” which should address Nicholas’ stakes question.

      As to irony, as a hacker he has leeched off the system. Using his skills to bring the system down is the irony.

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    2. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2012-10-03T16:03:07+10:00Added an answer on October 3, 2012 at 4:03 pm

      ugh … *course of action. Sorry.

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    3. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2012-10-03T16:02:33+10:00Added an answer on October 3, 2012 at 4:02 pm

      What are the stakes? Why does this hacker have to rise up and take down this system? (the link between him getting a virus and having to take such a drastic cause of action is totally unclear to me). Also … where’s the irony in a story about a great hacker having to continue doing what hackers do?

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    4. Kriss Tolliday
      2012-10-02T23:04:10+10:00Added an answer on October 2, 2012 at 11:04 pm

      Much better and more to the point but wander if you just need to state that the virus is deadly? Just add a ‘deadly digital virus’. Then it just shows that they are after his life and not just his computer files, if you see what I mean.

      Other than that it is much better. Good job

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    5. ChasFisher
      2012-10-02T13:12:05+10:00Added an answer on October 2, 2012 at 1:12 pm

      Coming from you Mr Scala that is high praise indeed.

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    6. sharkeatingman
      2012-10-02T13:08:34+10:00Added an answer on October 2, 2012 at 1:08 pm

      I wouldn’t change a thing. Good job…

      Geno Scala (sharkeatingman)- judge

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