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nhakin
Posted: October 24, 20202020-10-24T06:58:46+10:00 2020-10-24T06:58:46+10:00In: Comedy

When they get fed up of being rendered invisible by the daily routine of family life and by social expectations, four women in different places and times, unexpectedly one day decide to rebel.

When they get fed up of being rendered invisible by the daily routine of family life and by social expectations, four women in different places and times, unexpectedly one day decide to rebel.
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    1. Odie Samurai
      2020-10-31T01:09:59+10:00Added an answer on October 31, 2020 at 1:09 am

      I get this, but curious to know how you define “Rebel”.
      To me, the logline is missing that outside influence to push these random four women to rebel against the status quo (ACT 1), the struggle with the new normal (ACT II), some factor that pulls these four women together (ACT III).

      Take care.

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      • nhakin
        2021-01-03T07:38:35+10:00Replied to answer on January 3, 2021 at 7:38 am

        Hello there. Maybe the “against…” is missing.
        I’l think about it.
        Thanks!

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