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Posted: May 17, 20172017-05-17T20:03:36+10:00 2017-05-17T20:03:36+10:00In: Comedy

When they plot to kill each other the following day, a white supremacist and a black racist rather wake up in each other’s body and must team up and solve the problem or get killed by their gang members.

When they plot to kill each other the following day,
a white supremacist and a black racist rather wake up in each other’s body and must team up and solve the problem or get killed by their gang members.

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      Stauber Logliner
      2017-05-17T20:11:33+10:00Added an answer on May 17, 2017 at 8:11 pm

      A?white supremacist and black gang member wake up in the others body and must figure out a way to work together before their gangs turn on them?

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      Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2017-05-17T23:27:15+10:00Added an answer on May 17, 2017 at 11:27 pm

      Interesting collision of genres, yet, both have been done before on their own.? The body switching theme is usually of comedy though.

      Avoid “get killed by their gang members” and replace it with “get discovered” or something to that less direct effect as like Nindif mentions.

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      dpg Singularity
      2017-05-18T03:25:52+10:00Added an answer on May 18, 2017 at 3:25 am

      >>>Avoid ?get killed by their gang members? and replace it with ?get discovered? or something to that less direct effect…

      Beg to disagree. ?”Get discovered” — and then what? ?It’s an inconclusive statement because it doesn’t speciy the consequences, ?the jeopardy entailed in being discovered. What are the stakes ?of getting discovered?

      The highest possible stakes are losing their lives, being killed. ?Even if it’s a comedy, ?the protagonists should always be struggling for the highest possible stakes.

      fwiw

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      Richiev Singularity
      2017-05-18T10:52:04+10:00Added an answer on May 18, 2017 at 10:52 am

      Possible title: Freaking Friday

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      Neer Shelter Singularity
      2017-05-18T17:42:13+10:00Added an answer on May 18, 2017 at 5:42 pm

      It’s safe to say that body switching souls has become a bit of a trope. It, therefore, doesn’t really matter for this kind of film how they switch (lighting, magic potion or voodoo spell) what does is the ensuing complication.? This actually sounds interesting, while not original, it may have an audience.

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      hihello8484 Logliner
      2017-05-18T22:38:24+10:00Added an answer on May 18, 2017 at 10:38 pm

      Thanks so much Brothers for your insightful reviews. Very much appreciated.

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