When two losers, tempted by the promise of money, get mixed up in the love triangle of two witches, they will need all their wits to get out of the mess.
Alan SmitheePenpusher
When two losers, tempted by the promise of money, get mixed up in the love triangle of two witches, they will need all their wits to get out of the mess.
Share
Very cool premise, though it currently reads more like a comedy than action movie, and the final part of your logline: ‘they will need all their wits to get out of the mess’ seems a too convenient and vague description of how the conflict is resolved. Try changing it to something more specific to the story.