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When two missing teenage girls bodies are discovered, an unlikely pair of detectives must race to solve the case before more people dissapear.
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I think “the bodies of two missing teenaged girls” sounds better than “two missing teenage girls’ bodies.” I know my wording is a little longer but, in this instance, it sounds more natural to me. Also, can you hint at why the paring of the two detectives is so unlikely?
Hi… Which method do you Prefer????
Yes i agree Iam using the
Insighting
Spec Protag
Objective
Stakes.
But Karel class of 2014 uses
Flaw, Function, infighting, Goal,Shadow and Stakes….
Which do you use???
Sorry, I just noticed your question. Here’s the model I used the last time I wrote a logline.
1: The subject of the sentence to describe an imperfect but passionate and active protagonist.
2: The verb to depict the battle.
3:The direct object to describe an insurmountable antagonist who tries to stop the protagonist from reaching
4: a physical goal on account of
5: the stakes, if the goal is not reached.