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moviefreak81Samurai
Posted: October 29, 20172017-10-29T23:12:08+10:00 2017-10-29T23:12:08+10:00In: Examples

When two young couple fall in love, they must fight their families rivalry if they are to live their romance.

Romeo and Juliet

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      moviefreak81 Samurai
      2017-10-30T06:40:08+10:00Added an answer on October 30, 2017 at 6:40 am

      And your version gives a little more of the plot. Since the logline is intended for producers, perhaps your version would be preferable 🙂

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      dpg Singularity
      2017-10-30T05:08:03+10:00Added an answer on October 30, 2017 at 5:08 am

      My take:

      When teenagers from feuding families fall in love and secretly marry, they must struggle to reunite after the boy is banished for killing the girl’s cousin.
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      Of course, it’s only the greatest teenage love story ever written. (Juliet is only 13.? Romeo’s age is never stated, but given his immaturity, he is surely a teen himself).? My version focuses on the action line.

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      moviefreak81 Samurai
      2017-10-29T23:12:37+10:00Added an answer on October 29, 2017 at 11:12 pm

      My attempt at Romeo and Juliet…

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