Penpusher
Posted: 2020-06-28T12:58:32+10:00 In:

When unscrupulous salesperson Eleanor accidentally ends up in the Heaven-like Good Place in a case of mistaken identity, she must learn to pass as a good person if she is to avoid discovery and be cast into the Hellish torment of the Bad Place.

When unscrupulous salesperson Eleanor accidentally ends up in the Heaven-like Good Place in a case of mistaken identity, she must learn to pass as a good person if she is to avoid discovery and be cast into the Hellish torment of the Bad Place.
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    1. Samurai

      This could probably be trimmed a bit.

      Also – no need to give her name in the logline. It’s just blowing out word-count.

      When an unscrupulous salesperson accidentally goes to heaven, she enlists the help of an ethics professor to help her pass for as a good person, so she doesn’t get sent to hell.

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    2. Penpusher

      Nice. You’ve included a flaw for the MC and her predicament/story world in a way that shows how they will be in conflict. And even managed to squeeze in the stakes.

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