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Vilivo
Posted: March 21, 20132013-03-21T10:22:02+10:00 2013-03-21T10:22:02+10:00In: Student Loglines

When writing teacher Karels students start failing, he must kick it into overdrive in order to get his students to pass before the end of the Semester.

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    1. yawsbaws
      2013-03-21T10:24:24+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 10:24 am

      a tour de fource! three bags of popcorn and two candy drinks!

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    2. rlakin
      2013-03-21T10:25:11+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 10:25 am

      nice log line!

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    3. gabbatron
      2013-03-21T10:27:32+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 10:27 am

      sensational, flawless.

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    4. efajilan
      2013-03-21T10:28:34+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 10:28 am

      I hope I’m an extra in this one!
      I think aside from failing, there should be another main protagonist (the rebel student) to make it a bit more saucy 😀

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    5. ktramsay2
      2013-03-21T10:31:56+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 10:31 am

      Perfect. It needs a comma in the middle though. Also Karel should have a gun.

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    6. hsingh5
      2013-03-21T10:34:50+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 10:34 am

      Nice story using Karel in your logline.

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    7. Richiev Singularity
      2013-03-21T11:50:55+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2013 at 11:50 am

      How about this:

      “After a beleaguered teacher discovers his school’s deep budget cuts, he has till semester’s end to reach his failing but creative students before his writing program is closed.”

      This way you get a sense of stakes if the teacher doesn’t get his students to pass. Good luck!

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