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Posted: October 3, 20172017-10-03T00:27:43+10:00 2017-10-03T00:27:43+10:00In: Crime

While on vacation, a high-time thief spots a 1000 year-old birchbark canoe where he sets out a plan to do one more heist before he retires and while doing so stumbles across an asian group who will stop at nothing to protect the priceless artifact.

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      Lava0068 Logliner
      2017-10-03T00:28:06+10:00Added an answer on October 3, 2017 at 12:28 am

      A short!

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      dpg Singularity
      2017-10-03T03:27:02+10:00Added an answer on October 3, 2017 at 3:27 am

      Then what?? The logline sets up with an inciting incident and a protagonist but doesn’t follow through with a complete plot;? that is, a course of action he takes as a result of the inciting incident plus his covetousness.

      What does his covetousness lead him to do?? What action results?? IOW:? what is the plot?

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      Neer Shelter Singularity
      2017-10-03T10:44:09+10:00Added an answer on October 3, 2017 at 10:44 am

      Short or feature, a film still needs a plot and a plot needs a goal. In a short you can use a 1, 2 or 3 act structure, the format allows you to consolidate the story into fewer sequences but the forward momentum of a plot will still drive the story regardless its structure.

      You imply that the goal is to take the canoe, but it’s best to specify this and even better if you can clearly describe the motivation. Could the canoe have belonged to his ancestors and is currently being used as a humiliating tourist trap? Just a though.

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      Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2017-10-03T22:48:34+10:00Added an answer on October 3, 2017 at 10:48 pm

      High-time thieves target canoes? Lol

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