Logliner
Posted: 2017-02-04T09:33:08+10:00 In:

While trying to aid a quadriplegic man with an alternative method, a blind music therapist accidentally materializes an unholy spirit from her patient?s troubled mind, and it?s up to them to fight against it.

While trying to aid a quadriplegic man with an alternative method, a blind music therapist accidentally materializes an unholy spirit from her patient?s troubled mind, and it?s up to them to fight against it.
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    1. Singularity

      The first clause of the logline can be cut – the plot really starts once the spirit is released.

      However, I suggest you give them a unique method by which they choose to fight it, otherwise, it’s a relatively generic monster in the house kind of concept. Could they both be atheists but must perform an exorcism?? Could they need to find the last Indian shaman left to fight the spirit? Could they be in New Orleans and need to find a voodoo specialist?

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    2. Singularity

      I agree with Nir.
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      “When they accidentally release an unholy spirit, a quadriplegic and a blind musician must (Do thing thing) in order to send the creature back to hell where it belongs.”

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    3. Logliner

      Thanks a lot for the feedback. It means a lot to me and it’s really helpful. The issue about the characteristics of the demon is a dilemma I have as far as how it is presented. My idea is that the demon is only an pretext for a story that is more based on the characters. In fact, is more of a dark presence than something material. But I guess this needs to be redefined so the story has a clear direction and the main idea of the logline becomes clearer. Cheers.

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