While vacationing at the same location she experienced a cataclysmic event, a mother and her family are threatened with losing their lives, and their place in society, by people who look exactly like them. – ‘Us’

When a mother and her family are terrorized by their doppelgangers, she must…

That’s the general approach to loglining a film.? Start off with the protagonist, inciting incident and? story hook. .? In this case, the story hook is the doppelgangers.? ?So it’s the lead.? Don’t bury it at the end of the logline.

Also in a logline, the dramatic action should be framed in terms of what the protagonist proactively does.? This version leaves the protagonist (and her family) dangling in distress as hapless victims.? So what she must do?