With her main bread winner in rehab, and now facing bankruptcy, former child star sensation turned celebrity agent, Dolcie Dunn, must battle her industry rivals, scandal and a dysfunctional family to save her sanity and her business from financial ruin.

I suggest you study the recommendations in the ‘Formula’ tab. There is no need to mention a character’s name and the word count should be 30 or under.

Other than that, what is it the MC specifically wants? Her goal is unclear from the descriptions as they mention her wanting to save her sanity and her business, but which one is it that drives the plot?

The back story of what she was prior to being an agent is irrelevant and can be cut, what is missing, however, is the inciting incident. What specifically was the single event that motivated her to take action at the start of the story?