Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
LeviathanSamurai
Posted: April 3, 20192019-04-03T14:10:22+10:00 2019-04-03T14:10:22+10:00In: Adventure

With the help of the gods, the son of the Devil goes to earth to send the demons and creatures back to Hell that escaped after an explosion opens up a pathway for them to leave before they overrun earth and destroy everything.

With the help of the gods, the son of the Devil goes to earth to send the demons and creatures back to Hell that escaped after an explosion opens up a pathway for them to leave before they overrun earth and destroy everything.
  • -1
  • 3 3 Reviews
  • 403 Views
  • 0 Followers
  • 0
Share
  • Facebook

    Post a review
    Cancel reply

    You must login to add an answer.

    Forgot Password?

    To see everything, Sign Up Here

    3 Reviews

    • Voted
    • Oldest
    • Recent
    1. Robb Ross Samurai
      2019-04-10T00:48:57+10:00Added an answer on April 10, 2019 at 12:48 am

      Better to go with a longer logline than to have the wrong kinds of questions raised. The devil having a son is not a common idea so the point of it here should at least be hinted to. Why does the son want the demons back? How does the son act (seemingly) against his father? Why is the son needed when the gods can take care of everything?

      Offer a sense of how many escape, tens, hundreds, thousands?

      • 0
      • Reply
      • Share
        Share
        • Share on Facebook
        • Share on Twitter
        • Share on LinkedIn
        • Share on WhatsApp
    2. StanEllis Penpusher
      2019-04-06T02:49:11+10:00Added an answer on April 6, 2019 at 2:49 am

      You’ve got the protag, antag, rising stakes, rising tension. and battles. I can picture the movie… Good Job.

      • 0
      • Reply
      • Share
        Share
        • Share on Facebook
        • Share on Twitter
        • Share on LinkedIn
        • Share on WhatsApp
    3. Robb Ross Samurai
      2019-04-05T01:53:25+10:00Added an answer on April 5, 2019 at 1:53 am

      Is this the TV show from a few weeks ago?

      Too many questions here…it’s certainly good that the protag is different, but more info is needed to understand it and see the appeal.

      • 0
      • Reply
      • Share
        Share
        • Share on Facebook
        • Share on Twitter
        • Share on LinkedIn
        • Share on WhatsApp

    Sidebar

    Stats

    • Loglines 7,997
    • Reviews 32,189
    • Best Reviews 629
    • Users 3,710

    screenwriting courses

    Adv 120x600

    aalan

    Explore

    • Signup

    Footer

    © 2022 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
    With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.