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JoelChampPenpusher
Posted: April 6, 20182018-04-06T15:11:14+10:00 2018-04-06T15:11:14+10:00In: Horror

Working back late Halloween night, a small town teacher and some resentful students are terrorized in their own school by a masked killer.

Working back late Halloween night, a small town teacher and some resentful students are terrorized in their own school by a masked killer.
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    1. JoelChamp Penpusher
      2018-04-06T15:16:48+10:00Added an answer on April 6, 2018 at 3:16 pm

      I am still trying to get the message across that the students are there to get revenge on the teacher, but all end up fighting for their lives when a killer terrorizes them all. If anyone can help me word this right, I would be very appreciative. Thanks

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    2. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2018-04-06T17:38:10+10:00Added an answer on April 6, 2018 at 5:38 pm

      Students set out to terrorise a teacher working late on Halloween when they are set upon by a serial killer. They must now work with their teacher if they hope to survive the night.

      Students must work with the teacher they set out to terrorise when they are set upon by a serial killer.

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    3. variable Uberwriter
      2018-04-06T17:47:18+10:00Added an answer on April 6, 2018 at 5:47 pm

      how about this–
      “When some resentful students decide to terrify their small town teacher working late on halloween night, they end up instead facing a masked killer”

      It kinda implies: if a Teacher is working late, the setting is school.
      (You can still fit in “at school” before “on halloween night” if you wish to)

      PS. Cool Idea BTW ????

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    4. Jessie Samurai
      2018-04-06T22:57:46+10:00Added an answer on April 6, 2018 at 10:57 pm

      Defusing his resentful students’ late night Halloween prank, a teacher must save himself and the pranksters from a serial killer.

      still not quite there, but closer perhaps.

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    5. variable Uberwriter
      2018-04-06T23:29:19+10:00Added an answer on April 6, 2018 at 11:29 pm

      “After her students fail to terrify her on halloween, a small town teacher must save them when a real killer appears at school night”

      for teacher as protagonist and 24 words

      I had to trim out “resentful” and “masked”
      which you can fit in if you wish
      Godspeed Joel

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    6. Richiev Singularity
      2018-04-07T05:04:10+10:00Added an answer on April 7, 2018 at 5:04 am

      “When she and the class mean girls are given detention for fighting, the school outcast and her?bullies must band together to escape the locked down the school when a masked killer begins taking them out one by one.”
      —————————————–
      Possible title: Surviving Detention

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