Penpusher
Posted: 2022-10-05T17:42:08+10:00 In:

Young siblings have to use their very particular set of skills to counter bullying and alienation they’re experiencing after moving to a new country.

also thinking about replacing ‘particular’ with ‘unique’

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    1. Logliner

      Hi pinang,

      I like your logline as it is. I believe you can make it even more appealing though by playing with the words.
      For example:

      “To counter bullying and alienation in the new country they’ve just relocated to, young siblings must use their very particular set of skills.”

      I hope this helps
      Good Luck

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    2. Logliner

      Well, it depends on their skills. But the term “particular” + set of skills, is more cinematic I think
      I’m glad you liked it though.

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