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Yup you are the master.... got the thing... will make the changee
That is the point though, you have to be able to condense your story into the fewest number of words to get to the heart of it. You have a lot of extra details that are not required for a logline. If you can't you may not have a focused enough story. How about this?
"When an old woman wakes up in the spirit world and realizes she has died and only has 80 minutes until she is reborn to correct her karma, she must complete a series of tasks or risk a new life of struggle and trials."
44 words and says the same thing.
Thanx a lot.....tried for a log line, but not able to incorporate the crux of the story.
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