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Good point raised by David.
Inciting incident should precede the action.
I feel like your logline might read a bit better if you reverse the order things are told in. For example when a distressed woman disappears into the forest a directionless raft guide must enlist his athlete friends to find her.
At the moment it reads a bit like the movie starts after he has already seen her and enlisting the friends is the inciting incident.
I think the word "mysterious" should be banned from loglines. When this word appears, you know for sure that there is something to be clarified.
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