A young woman imprisoned in Greenland must prepare for her eventual release while at the same time dealing with the issue of guilt.

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Clint Cure · Wordsmith · 695 pts

Maybe a few questions could be answered and more interest aroused if we knew what she was guilty of.

Neer Shelter · Legend · 39,985 pts

What DPG said, the concept lacks the basic elements that make a plot.

"?young woman?" is a very weak description of a main character as it is too generic and doesn't imply a flaw for her to overcome.

Dealing with something is not an action it is the experience of an emption, these are all too common in loglines where a writer didn't choose exactly what the character does.

What does she actually do in the story? What does she actually want?

Hope this helps.