After a lot of fairytale characters take over his swamp, the xenophobic ogre must save the princess to get his swamp back.

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Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

Shrek

Solid attempt, however, you might want to avoid using the term 'a lot'
I would say drop 'a lot' altogether or use a more interesting word, like Gaggle.

"After fairytale creatures overrun his swamp, a reclusive ogre must save a princess to get his swamp back."

"After a gaggle of fairytale creatures overrun his swamp, a reclusive ogre must save a princess to get his swamp back."