The moment we read "we see the..." especially followed by "lives and times" we indeed get the impression of reading a pitch for a TV show. It is too loose. Even if it were a TV show, you would still need to supply some tight plot premise.
Also, omit any names. Instead, write a couple of words about what the character's psychology is about.
I see that your premise is that people die around the main character. This doesn't look like an important event, though, in the midst of a zombie apocalypse. That's a part of the zombie (or horror) film convention: people die (and rise) all the time around everybody?especially the main character.
Unless it's a comedy and the main character is an narcissist/egomaniac who thinks that everything revolves AROUND and happens TO him. But I don't think this is your intention.