After Alexander The Great’s death, one of his generals seizes Egypt, fights to restore it into a mighty empire, and eventually becomes Pharoah, founding a dynasty of kings, queens, and gods.

Good luck with this. Never thought about the historical similarities in that manner, definitely a unique take.

Thanks for your perspectives. I'm not convinced enough people know who Ptolemy was and even if they've heard of the name they may think we was an astronomer! I agree with your other comments - need to find a way of saying something about wresting Egypt from the hands of his contemporaries as the western world descends into chaos. (This has resonances with the breakup of the USSR!)

Replace founding with reveling or establishing in your logline as its emphasis on the characters bond.

Your logline should look like:

Despite death of Alexander the great, one of his retainer seize to restore Egyptian empire, reveling the dynasty of Gods and Kings