After an accident causes a successful CEO to lose both legs, he is forced to re-evaluate his life and identity

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rjsilva · Penpusher · 95 pts

Richiev said exactly what I thought, shorten it. When a CEO loses his legs, he must reinvent(is more proactive than re-evaluate)his identity (or else, before, some sort of consequence).

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

There is definitely a "Regarding Henry" feel to this.

I would look at the first line "After an accident causes a successful CEO to lose both legs,"

I would shorten it, "When a successful CEO loses both his legs." because we will assume he didn't lose his legs on purpose.

As for the rest I would simply listen to the advice given by the others who have commented.

Anyway, I hoped that helped. Good luck!

andrewclau · Samurai · 615 pts

I agree with this, we need to know what the process of re-evaluation is because that seems to be the core of the story - at the same time I think we need to know what the stakes are - So what if he doesn't re-evaluate his life or identity? Does this mean the entire company will fall apart and the other company stake holders kick him off the executive board?