After her arranged husband separates her from her piano, a mute pianist must earn her piano back one key at a time by giving lessons to the man who bought it and who secretly loves her.

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The Piano

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tigereyestudios · Penpusher · 95 pts

Nice logline. Could you review mine it should be the newest one. Im working on the script for mine

Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Yes good point.

The piano is her only connection to the world in the beginning so it does need to be emphasised in the logline.

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

My take:

When her new husband trades away her beloved piano for land, a mute pianist must earn it back one key at a time by giving lessons to the new owner who secretly loves her.
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I inserted "beloved" to highlight the intensity of her emotional attachment to the piano, ?her desperate need to get it back.