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She is a bartender.
The term, "25-year-old young woman" is a bit clunky. (If you tell us she is 25 you don't need to further tell us she is young)
Also "Moonlights herself" is also a little weird. Because...
First: you can just say "Moonlights as a dancer"
Second: We don't know what the lead character's day job is, it doesn't matter if she is moonlighting, unless there is a conflict between the day job and the dance gig.
I revised it.