After leaving his tiny home village, A lonely man returns many years later to win back his childhood sweetheart only to find out she never existed.

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Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

You wrote:
"...It's awesome! I love it!!!!..."
about your own logline.

You know we can see your name at the bottom of your comments, right?

Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Agreed with DPG and Savinh0.

Also, "...lonely man..." sounds rather generic, is there anything else about him that would make him a unique character? Preferably, this would be a flaw he has to overcome.

On a side note, did the sweetheart actually exist and was kidnapped or killed? Or was she a figment of his imagination?