It seams like murdering her father was a "tacked on" method of making it personal for the MC, perhaps better to make it the inciting incident. Also the logline as it is now reads a bit too convoluted for it's own good maybe shorten it by taking out a few descriptions:
After witnessing an outlaw murder her father, a gutsy engineer must stop him from steeling her train and pulling off the biggest heist in US history.
Only thing is the MC could use a flaw in my mind so the "...gutsy..." description can change to what ever the flaw is.