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Now *THAT*'s interesting.
Consider the word "Idealistic". To me, this sounds like a normal attribute of a priest rather than a fatal flaw.
I'd swap it for something describing a stronger flaw, or a deeper or ironic flaw.
Thanks to both of you for the feedback, I'll be back with a revision soon.
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