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Hi there. Seems like you might have an interesting story, but the logline is very confusing. I suggest you reconstruct your sentence. What explodes, is it Apollo 13? What absorbs cosmic energy, the bubble gum or Apollo 13? What happens to the meteors? There's a missing verb there. Do the meteors crash to Earth, or explode in the Earth's atmosphere?
I hope that helps. Would d appreciate it if you could also comment on my logline.
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