EBABE confronts danger, finds romance, humor, and financial success during her buying and selling eventures online.

Yeah I think we need to know a lot more about what the story is. Does she have to remove herself from her desk and go into the real world o a mission to sell something?

At the minute the story isn't very compelling and needs something in the log line other than a woman sitting at a computer all day.

Is it a film or a series? If it is a series this is like the overall story of the programme and each episode will have a different story to tell? I'm not really sure what it is and that needs to be clarified so readers aren't confused.

Movies are a visual medium, I am not sure if someone sitting at a computer buying and selling things would necessarily make for a compelling movie.

As for the logline, It seems more like a blurb than a logline. What is EBABE's goal and who is standing in her way?