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Awesome feedback! Thank you guys!!!
You need to mention what the decision is. All this stuff -- love, success, money, loyalty, redemption or life itself -- is too vague. You need to be specific with the protagonist's goals and what the actual conflict is.
I agree with Jim's comments.
The problem is, after reading the logline, I have no idea what the story is about.
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