Five disease research scientists are trapped in their underground laboratory by the containment system after an experimental airborne drug leaks out, only to discover it may have deadly side-effects.

by Paul Clarke · Showrunner · 1,870 pts June 9, 2017 576 views

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Neer Shelter · Script Doctor · 40,115 pts June 12, 2017

The redraft is better but still too wordy.

How about:

After a contamination lockdown traps a team of lab workers, a selfish scientist must lead them all to safety before they all succumb to the psychotic side effects of the virus.

Richiev · Oracle · 58,825 pts June 10, 2017

In a story a lead character has a goal, your logline has neither a lead character or a goal. It simply presents a situation.

1: Who is the lead character?
2: What is their goal
3: What is standing in the way of the lead character's ?goal?
4: What must the lead character do about it?

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