Hey y’all! I wrote 2 for the same script. Preferences, suggestions, ideas are welcome. Great forum !! #1. A promising young professor is forced to return to his remote and crumbling hometown, where he finds a monomaniac preacher who claims to know the secret behind his dark past. #2. After learning of a friend’s mysterious death, a young professor must return to his remote and crumbling hometown, where he finds a monomaniac preacher spreading a dark and dangerous gospel.

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Richiev · Oracle · 58,825 pts

I agree woobot, The idea that he "battles the preacher" instead of he just "finds the preacher" adds conflict to the logline.

woobot · Logliner · 235 pts

I like the 2nd one.
I don't know what a monomaniac is...guess I'll look it up.
Could the preacher be maniacal?

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After learning of his friend's mysterious death, a young professor returns to his remote hometown, where he must battle a maniacal preacher spreading a dangerous gospel.

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