While the goal seems solid, the way you describe the three protagonists is confusing.
I have know Idea what a rogue munitions runner is.
Saying, "A failed government experiment" is confusing and it took me reading it a second time to realize you were talking about a person.
While 'resistance fighter' is more clear, who is he fighting against? In fact you haven't told us who is experimenting on the children. Who is the bad guy?
I think you have an idea here but with a re-write it could become more clear as to what is going on.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!