Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors of the forties must struggle to foil the Villains who want to make them spread an elusive virus which threaten the worldwide networks.

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Who Scanned XX ? (USCO case #1-942119421 – WGAW # 1655866)

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Hi Karel,

I read your post about dual protagonists. This is very true and very helpfull. I 'll take care not to fall into one of the errors you describe

I hope there will not be any big problem in this story because the main characters and their relationships are clearly defined from the beginning: I write the chart of characters before or at the same time as the Synopsis :

- XX and BB models are Laurel and Hardy: they are the two opposite personalities of a single hero. They share the same quest, the same flaw, the same conflict, the same antagonist, ... and are almost always together present on the screen. Their only duality is in their inner goals and their mutual relationship:
- XX is friendly, mischievous and scatterbrain and is regularly called to order by BB; and the only woman he cares for is JX
- BB is a false-macho sex maniac, grumpy, down to earth, but he is regularly get out of a mess by XX

- As I said above, Pete and Dr Brown are something like the Thomson and Thompson meet the Professor Calculus?. Dr Brown appear later than Pete, but his arrival rightly allows Pete to take more consistency and credibility. They enrich each other by sharing their knowledge.

Is this better please?

"Sent despite themselves on the internet to spread an elusive virus, two famous Toon-actors just 3D-digitized must prevent Villains? of leading the world into a backward of forty years."
(29 words)

"Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors are sent despite themselves on the internet to spread an elusive virus and must prevent Villains? of leading the world into a backward of forty years."
(31 words)

Or a longer version :
"To restart their careers, two famous toon-actors make them 3D-digitized, but then are sent despite themselves on the internet to spread an elusive virus and must prevent Villains? of leading the world into a backward of forty years."
(38 words)

(NB: They need to be two because the virus code is dispersed in their two binary files, allowing to make it elusive)

In "Who framed Roger Rabbit", Eddie and Roger are the real odd couple, actually, and Roger is Eddie's constant problem.

Well JM, stop daydreaming and rewrite this logline!

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