A passionate biker girl sacrifices her successful banking career for true love; embarks on a love quest of her inspirational soulmate who Architects her Motorcycle feat of a life time.

by shiva · Logliner · 140 pts April 23, 2017 766 views

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An ordinary girl sacrifices her extraordinary career to win her love; embarks on a hilarious Motorcycle quest of her inspirational soulmate .

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Neer Shelter · Script Doctor · 40,115 pts April 24, 2017

This is both vague and confusing. Sorry for the negative opening to my post, but the primary function of a logline is to clearly describe a plot, but in this case, the plot is unclear and the wording is confusing.

The main character is a biker girl - good.

What is her inciting incident, or in other words, what motivates her to HAVE to take action for fear of something very bad happening?

What is her flaw, what is the characteristic that she must overcome over the course of the story?

Lastly, and most importantly, what is her goal? Without this last item there is no plot and without a plot there is no story.

I suggest you check out the 'Formula' tab for more information about constructing loglines.

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